Okay, so here's the second draft, taking the feedback into consideration. I've stripped this way back now, and added in a lot more exposition into the "Germ War" just to regain the balance between my aesthetic choice and what the animation is actually about.
Tuesday 8 March 2016
Fantastic Voyage - Screenplay for "Germ Warfare" (working title) Second draft.
Okay, so here's the second draft, taking the feedback into consideration. I've stripped this way back now, and added in a lot more exposition into the "Germ War" just to regain the balance between my aesthetic choice and what the animation is actually about.
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