After reflecting on further feedback, I've made the necessary changes to the narration. It puts more emphasis on the hopeless cause of the antibiotics, clears up the "Preston" bit at the end, and cuts the wife and son aspect out completely.
Sunday, 13 March 2016
Fantastic Voyage - War of the Germs screenplay, final version?
After reflecting on further feedback, I've made the necessary changes to the narration. It puts more emphasis on the hopeless cause of the antibiotics, clears up the "Preston" bit at the end, and cuts the wife and son aspect out completely.
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Okay - time to get this adapted for the screen!
ReplyDeleteThanks Phil, I've got a rough storyboard finished, as well as the basic edit for my animatic done. Will upload that soon.
DeleteThen it's just a case of cleaning it all up ready for tomorrow :)