Here's a rejigged version of my last animatic, complete with cleaner line art!
All that's left to do is the pitch presentation, and I think I'm golden. Fingers crossed the pitch itself goes well tomorrow. Breathe Joe, just breathe :P
A quick tip - I'd rethink the use of that one piece of music that sits across the top of your film like 'too much gravy'... consider not using it like gravy. I like how and when the music ends, but I don't think it should loom so heavily from the get go. What do you think? I think an evocative sound design (wind, distant explosions, gunfire etc) would be more immersive and less like we were watching a music video...
Hey Joe,
ReplyDeleteA quick tip - I'd rethink the use of that one piece of music that sits across the top of your film like 'too much gravy'... consider not using it like gravy. I like how and when the music ends, but I don't think it should loom so heavily from the get go. What do you think? I think an evocative sound design (wind, distant explosions, gunfire etc) would be more immersive and less like we were watching a music video...
Hey Phil, I'll give it a shot.
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