Sunday, 13 March 2016

Fantastic Voyage - War of the Germs screenplay, final version?




After reflecting on further feedback, I've made the necessary changes to the narration. It puts more emphasis on the hopeless cause of the antibiotics, clears up the "Preston" bit at the end, and cuts the wife and son aspect out completely.

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  1. Okay - time to get this adapted for the screen!

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    1. Thanks Phil, I've got a rough storyboard finished, as well as the basic edit for my animatic done. Will upload that soon.

      Then it's just a case of cleaning it all up ready for tomorrow :)

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